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Unbound Space

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Nilanjana Biswas
·January 15, 2002·1 min read·4 comments
Unbound Space Mining the minds I want to travel all the minds And see myself in it Where thoughts meet ideas Timeless, unbound by space A whole new human race Reflection of your face On unrippled Love Unrestricted, unbound by space I want to travel all the minds See your thoughts without venetian blinds Uncluttered, unbound by space No forgotten flotsam No coagulated clotted dreams Unfettered, unbound by space

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Amisharchive~2001-2003

Nilanjana you have written this lovely little piece perfect..i wish others'd be able to see in it what i've seen and felt and appreciate the substance embedded in the travel of unsubstantiality...thank u for making me feel and fly in my own unbound space. [ Reply to this ]

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Nilanjana Biswasarchive~2001-2003

Yes! Amish, it's good to fly. We look for space elsewhere to fly but there is a whole universe within us and other individuals and an infinite number of lifetimes is not enough to explore them. [ Reply to this ]

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hemantarchive~2001-2003

Nilanjana, once again, great job, i'm your fan!!! Excerpt from "The Space Between" by The Dave Matthews Band:- The space between our wicked lies where we hope to keep safe from pain... The space between whats wrong and right is where i'll be hiding waiting for you... The space between your heart and mind is the space we fill with time... [ Reply to this ]

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Nilanjana Biswasarchive~2001-2003

"The Space Between" - Dave Matthews Band perceives the basic idiosyncrasy of humans -to escape from the inevitable, to hide from the truth. Time is infinite and we try to measure it and we have measured it, packaged it, labelled it and sold it as "life". [ Reply to this ] From Nilanjana Biswas's desk Email Nilanjana Biswas 1 2 3 4 5 Total 2 ratings. Home | Post Article | General Musings | Slice Of Life | Humor | People | Wanderlust | Sports | Short Stories | Long Stories | Poetry | Book Reviews | eBooks | Devil's Dictionary | Borrowed Best:Articles | Borrowed Best:Stories | Borrowed Best:Poetry | Quick Links | Feedback if ((navigator.appVersion.substring(0,1) '); } All trademarks and copyrights on this page are owned by their respective companies. Comments are owned by the Poster. The Rest ©2000 Live2Read var site="sm3l2r" None

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