I am You
Introspective ...
I am the air that you breathe I am the anger that you seethe I am the laughter that you drink I am the disaster on your brink I am the invisible halo around your head I am the being that you have fed I am the sleep that you elude I am the thought that makes you brood I am the greed that you need I am the flower from your seed I am the thorn you have pricked I am the blade you have nickedvI am the world you have lost I am the best at your worst I am the sickness that you fear I am the soul-slander you smear I am the spear that you blood-taint I am the devil you call saint I am you that you crave I am the life you want to save
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.