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Rhapsodized Incontinent Inebriation

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Aragorn
·July 17, 2002·1 min read·3 comments
Rhapsodized Incontinent Inebriation The Question remains unanswered I wont be forever let it out,lemme in I just cant empty my heart when its full to brim I dont love,I dont hate call this karma,call this fate I do care, I do share some I lose,some I dare I wont cry, nothing's worth it I wont even try, to manumit. I dont dream, nothin makes me scream nothing seems to shake me what can possibly break me I like the sun not as much as the candle too much light kills me I need darkness to cradle the question always stays in hills n meadows am I a man or just my shadow..

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Kreeparchive~2001-2003

Awesome !! Your choice of words is extraordinary. I really liked the poem - unpretentious, poignant and sad [ Reply to this ]

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shwetaarchive~2001-2003

well written, seems u delved into ur soul n wrote str. from heart. Yeah it sometimes becomes hard to ascertain our identity and usually we wabble in between our's n people's spurious perception. One can never opine to emancipate from this illusion, so i guess inorder to find out WHO ARE YOU? you first need to find out WHY ARE YOU? [ Reply to this ]

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Aragornarchive~2001-2003

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