Silly Tears by Savanah Gray
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Posted by Savanah
on January 30, 2003 (Thursday)
This is a poem about tears that appear from nowhere. Guess you have to be a woman.
Silly tears, from where
do you flow?
I cant find the place
But you're silent
and slow.
Do you begin
In that secret place
Where heartaches hide
And dont show their face?
I cant find the reason
Yet, you refuse to cease
So, just flow silly tears
And, bring me release.
SBG----1/5/03
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bulletarchive~2001-2003some very beautiful and simple lines. The way i see the world: Everything inside - seen outside... everything inside - shown outside.
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Savanaharchive~2001-2003Thank you and yes, they are. Savanah
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Ankur Sehgalarchive~2001-2003hi Savanah , these tears are not silly; they flow from those slice of lives that are gone and gone forever. You know what, people try to rename the tears to recall the past in different ways; the way they always wanted it to happen but then its life - it still goes on. Everytime we cant win; lets loose to situations. All the best. the LONE EAGLE Sehgal p.s. Seek the prayers for the dyin'