Kaleidoscope
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Posted by somdatta roy choudhury
on April 20, 2003 (Sunday)
A Kaleidoscope..
Steep winding corniche
miles of solitude
Kills your simplest wish
questions your fortitude
The black is pervasive
blinds your soul
The speck of light, elusive
eternal, the quest for control
The going seems dark
a yawning chasm
Wake up, embark!
seek the prized prism
A streak of light
the undaunted fight
Rainbows of hope
live it, its a kaleidoscope!
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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crackednutarchive~2001-2003a perfect comparison. Kaleidoscopes. Those that change their shapes at different angles. Perception and colour! Amazing piece of poetry. keep up the good work and keep those grey cells ticking.
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somdatta roy choudhuryarchive~2001-2003hi crackednut, thanks for the appreciation :)