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Shadowy Waters

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torordoltelme
·November 16, 2003·1 min read·1 comments
Shadowy Waters A man sittin in his Hammock with the Sea under him....his thoughts...as in my thoughts if i were there! Lying in my Hammock,below the transparent sea thinking about Life, this life no longer transparent to me. Like Mirky Waters does it flow, i cannot see through it but this water flows below, the shells i see through it. Wishing my life was the Sea as transparent as i wanted it to be But shadows fall on this SEA Shadows that dont let me SEE This lonliness doesnt leave me alone So i begin to moan Sleep catches up with me So now i let it be me Now i get up still above the water still above the Sea the Time for this is getting shorter, too short for me For now I have to get up, get out from this Hammock Leave these Waters behind, and let my Waters create HAVOC!

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