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Hey even I wrote a poem .. here how it starts .."twinkle twinkle little star , how I wonder what you are .." Come on people, dont pinch from sixth grade poems! I am sure will must be turning in his grave seeing the fate of his poor reaper (at least she didnt die solitary) 0KB [ Reply to this ]
Hey 'Optimist', Sorry to say - didn't like your peice at all - it's a combibnation of literary peices of great literary men - like the first part was from 'Solitary Reaper' - the middle felt like from 'Highway Man' and the ending para 'And after that he took her along with him...& retrace all she had done for him' is also from some other peice - it seems very familiar. Don't you have anything original to write?? Whatever you have written, it's a job bad done and it lacks depth and maturity. Ujjaini. [ Reply to this ]
i didn't take ur comment as a scurrilous remark but it was a source to improve myself. Well thanx for reflecting my weak pts.but it was a mendacoius statement by u that its a combination of literary pieces.As far as originality is concerned , i've just tried to elucidate one phase of life in my own way except the starting para which was originally taken from Solitrary Reaper, & its my fault that i haven't mentioned it in my introductry part,& if rest is simmilar to other pieces ,then its just a coincidence. And if other literary people can think & write on simmilar topic ,so why can't I ??? And i'll definitly try to bring more depth & maturity in my next attempt. Optimist [ Reply to this ]
Well, don't take it too hard dear. And even though it has elements of existing literary pieces, I saw it as an interesting experiment. Nothing spectacular, I'm afraid, but interesting nonetheless. Hope you take my honest remark in earnest and keep writing whatever comes to the Heart. In the end we are all here to enjoy ourselves, aren't we??? [ Reply to this ] From optimist's desk Email optimist 1 2 3 4 5 Total 6 ratings. Home | Post Article | General Musings | Slice Of Life | Humor | People | Wanderlust | Sports | Short Stories | Long Stories | Poetry | Book Reviews | eBooks | Devil's Dictionary | Borrowed Best:Articles | Borrowed Best:Stories | Borrowed Best:Poetry | Quick Links | Feedback if ((navigator.appVersion.substring(0,1) '); } All trademarks and copyrights on this page are owned by their respective companies. Comments are owned by the Poster. The Rest ©2000 Live2Read var site="sm3l2r" None