What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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Was this your dream or imagination, or is this how you percieve things...I am just curious why is it here? [ Reply to this ]
well written, short and to the point...the flow is smooth considering it is free verse. But tell me why does she cut her wrist..perhaps you could have put in a line with the reason, but then maybe you deliberately avoided it to focus on the act itself. Anyways, interesting read. dizzy [ Reply to this ] From Andrea Trenary's desk Email Andrea Trenary 1 2 3 4 5 Total 1 ratings. Home | Post Article | General Musings | Slice Of Life | Humor | People | Wanderlust | Sports | Short Stories | Poetry | Book Reviews | eBooks | Devil's Dictionary | Rigmarole | Topic for the Week | Request for Comments | Writers Toolkit | Ask Our Experts | Borrowed Best | Quick Links | Feedback if ((navigator.appVersion.substring(0,1) '); } All trademarks and copyrights on this page are owned by their respective companies. Comments are owned by the Poster. The Rest ©2000 Live2Read var site="sm3l2r" None