Love and Life on a Lazy Afternoon ...
“Kiss me now Kiss me soon” A wild wanton thought In the afternoon!
Never it is enough Absolute nut Inside soft Outside tough!
Tingling in the loins Heated mind Trying to think Never mind!
Foolish fancies Take the scene I’m in love That’s where I’ve been!
Reality rules Cold water On warm thoughts Passion cools!
Occupied mind Occupied body Love enthralls Everybody!
“I need you now I need you soon” Reality strikes In the afternoon!
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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Good Rhyme is like pasta with thyme cool on the tongue and warm as to the belly clung I liked the idea of pressing passion to mid afternoon thoughts [ Reply to this ]
"pasta with thyme" - hmmm! lip-smackingly provocative. Passion is omnipresent and not restricted to just nights!!!! [ Reply to this ]
Hi Nilanjana ji I have read most of your poetry and I like it. These are excellent. I am sorry but I am very much eager to ask u what is your profession. R u a professional artist? R u in India? I enjoyed your poetry on Internet. I am a Post-doctoral Fellow at University of Georgia, Athens, USA. Very often whenever I got time I like to do Internet serve of many of artist. I also like to song classical music. Any way I enjoyed your poetry and once again congratulations for very good poetry. Best of luck for your feature. With Warm Regard. Sincerely Yours Vijay [ Reply to this ]
Hello! Vijay, Please call me "Nilanjana" - the "ji" makes me feel ancient. I'm basically in the Telecom sector working for a MNC in HR. Thank you for appreciating my work. I denote life as I see it and often words are not enough. Perception is so individualistic that its actuality is often distorted with words. [ Reply to this ]
Namste Nilanjana How are u? Plz. excuse me after so long time I reply u. I like your poetry and also egar to know about your new poetry. It is my kind request that can u send me your email id so that I can communicate with u through email. My email id is vgawandi@yahoo.com. Since at present I am a post-doctoral research associate at University of Georgia, Athens, USA and very much busy with my research work, thats why I can not read your lit. I will be highely apprieciate u if u send me your lit. through email. thanking you. With Warm Regards. Sincerely Yours Vijay [ Reply to this ] From Nilanjana Biswas's desk Email Nilanjana Biswas 1 2 3 4 5 Total 1 ratings. Home | Post Article | General Musings | Slice Of Life | Humor | People | Wanderlust | Sports | Short Stories | Long Stories | Poetry | Book Reviews | eBooks | Devil's Dictionary | Borrowed Best:Articles | Borrowed Best:Stories | Borrowed Best:Poetry | Quick Links | Feedback if ((navigator.appVersion.substring(0,1) '); } All trademarks and copyrights on this page are owned by their respective companies. Comments are owned by the Poster. The Rest ©2000 Live2Read var site="sm3l2r" None