It sucks..dont bother reading it.just posted it to see my name in print....
To some I m a diamond, to some I m rust For some I m a coward, for some I m brave, Part of me glitters, part is covered with dust Who I really am, to know I crave.
Whenever I m happy, part of me is sad When I m down, part of me is glad The guys who love you, I keep them on the shelf Trying to get that elusive book on the top corner myself
I don’t know why they r mean to me When I give them my all, But life ain’t fair I know No song can have all enthralled.
But all that I ve seen, All that I ve learnt blatantly Is don’t shine your diamonds To people blind nonchalantly..
So as I end this moronic discourse I believe in love, I believe in other silly stuff But as I look at the reflection of me I know I have had enough .
Sometimes you just wish you could break the shell So others could look at the pearl inside And as they would sigh in dismay I bet the shell itself would have cried.
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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Don't break your shell For outside It's neither heaven nor hell Let the pearl glitter inside Be enthralled with your song The music outside has long gone Great stuff - ultimately we all have to seek Asylum in our Souls. [ Reply to this ]
Cracking shells, raising hell, all alone, not much fun, but hey my world, rocks! lol, i don't even know why i wrote this. But hey, the poem is good... both of them! [ Reply to this ]
nice to know someone actually liked it.especially comin from u nilanjana..i ve read alot of ur stuff here..u write superb stuff..keep it up [ Reply to this ]
Sometimes the simplest thoughts convey the deepest feelings and truth. Simplicity is Truth. Thank you for your appreciation and I hope to see more of your "simplicity" in the future - something that we can all identify with. [ Reply to this ]
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