have a broken heart?
I close my eyes, My mind gains togetherness, I count my heart beats, My mind stays together... I think... A heartbeat of mine, And another thousand, To realize that, Our heartbeats together, A million of them, Don't count anymore.
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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I understand and know what you mean. [ Reply to this ]
Its good that you understand, cos i just felt it and never understood it. Maybe we wait too long sometimes (or count too long). [ Reply to this ] From bullet's desk 1 2 3 4 5 Total 0 ratings. Home | Post Article | General Musings | Slice Of Life | Humor | People | Wanderlust | Sports | Short Stories | Long Stories | Poetry | Book Reviews | eBooks | Devil's Dictionary | Borrowed Best:Articles | Borrowed Best:Stories | Borrowed Best:Poetry | Quick Links | Feedback if ((navigator.appVersion.substring(0,1) '); } All trademarks and copyrights on this page are owned by their respective companies. Comments are owned by the Poster. The Rest ©2000 Live2Read var site="sm3l2r" None