mmmmm...just read it.
Tired of dummy desolations, Sated with pilfered prejudices, Ill of charred chastity, Bound with rites' futile finery, Hallucinated by thoughtless theism, Repressed by encumbent emotions, Choked by aching attachments, Denied by alluding ambiguity, Tortured by transitory trysts, Seared by holllow helplessness, Flabbergasted by dubious dimunitions..... The mind rebels and the spirit exults to be- Charmed by virginal verity, Balmed by crystal clarity, Healed by disappearing depravity, Intoxicated by rational reasonings, Driven by passionate perseverance, And glorified by seductive selfishness.......
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.
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hi types, i was just reding this thing again and i found one line very awkward to read and i could not agree with it .it was "healed by disappearing depravity" could u pleez explain how depravity in any form can be healing ? [ Reply to this ]
i dont think u read the phrase properly.....its not depravity ,its"disappearing depravity".....now think about it......wont it be divinely coalescing once depravity starts vanishing...... [ Reply to this ] From funkyfudge's desk Email funkyfudge 1 2 3 4 5 Total 2 ratings. Home | Post Article | General Musings | Slice Of Life | Humor | People | Wanderlust | Sports | Short Stories | Long Stories | Poetry | Book Reviews | eBooks | Devil's Dictionary | Borrowed Best:Articles | Borrowed Best:Stories | Borrowed Best:Poetry | Quick Links | Feedback if ((navigator.appVersion.substring(0,1) '); } All trademarks and copyrights on this page are owned by their respective companies. Comments are owned by the Poster. The Rest ©2000 Live2Read var site="sm3l2r" None