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charu
·September 07, 2002·1 min read·2 comments
Open up Smile smile at least for a while It will carry you along a mile Don't you feel you are alone and those happy are gone Stop now cursing your fate Open up your hearts gate Let in let in that bird that dove Let it bring you lots of love

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Jiffy JCarchive~2001-2003

Absolutely amazing! You've used simple words to portray a very simple, yet DEEP message. Blessed you are for you know the true way of life! :'-) [ Reply to this ]

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Techyarchive~2001-2003

Hi, Good one ! it does bring a smile .... Keep it up ! Techy [ Reply to this ] From charu's desk Email charu 1 2 3 4 5 Total 2 ratings. Home | Post Article | General Musings | Slice Of Life | Humor | People | Wanderlust | Sports | Short Stories | Long Stories | Poetry | Book Reviews | eBooks | Devil's Dictionary | Borrowed Best:Articles | Borrowed Best:Stories | Borrowed Best:Poetry | Quick Links | Feedback if ((navigator.appVersion.substring(0,1) '); } All trademarks and copyrights on this page are owned by their respective companies. Comments are owned by the Poster. The Rest ©2000 Live2Read var site="sm3l2r" None

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