Death
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Posted by vibhor
on February 28, 2003 (Friday)
One of my poems a bit sad so dont get aggitated but thats me....
I'm the prisoner of paradise
With my arms wide open
But tied to the pillars of fortune;
I'm the pearl of my eye
And I beckon lives,
I'm the story that never ends
Cause death adds to the chain
The chain that makes the ripples
Glimmer bright in the moonlit night
A drop of the eye...
The bottom of my emotions.
I am death,
And I am beautiful
For it is I, who makes Life, worth living.
....for it is I, who summons the grief of loss.
For it is I, who brings a tear, the pearl of somebody's eye.
What stayed with you?
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samuraiarchive~2001-2003nice lines: "I'm the prisoner of paradise With my arms wide open But tied to the pillars of fortune"... well written!
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vibhorarchive~2001-2003thanks man ...dude infact i need some one to give me a kick...thjat is a motivational kick seriously actually im in a band also so i was planning to do lyrics for a song but ended up with what u call a poem i have a couple of others too will upload the sooner or later..
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Kreeparchive~2001-2003This is a great song .. Beautiful words and very melancholy yet captivating .. nice work