An Empty Moment In Time
Time...u just dun know.....
This empty moment in time
so vacant so droll
an effort even to smile
time seems to crawl
Empty laughter, empty words
empty look and empty talk
all is empty, nothing worth
these bare walls seem to mock
Why this vacuum
what for this wait
Is it bliss, Is it doom
that which we await
This feeling of being trapped
will it abate with dawn
for now time seems to stand
feeling dead, hope to be reborn.
What stayed with you?
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