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Mukhtasar
·June 28, 2000·2 min read

Elements of love or death

Posted by Mukhtasar on Wednesday June 28, @02:52AM

Earth ..Air ....Verse

pardon my begging for this amateurish verse without a life ...

I am a rock .. but now in love ... She's like the Earth.. of noble birth... dazzling blue hill..with the sun above ... held her in my arms and she turned to soil... winds blew.. there was turmoil.

I am the Earth.. and now in love ... She's like the air .. a noble heir... smells like flowers bloom and summer rain... held her in my arms .. slipped away... to lands unknown and far away.

I am the air ..and now in love ... She's like water.. gentle calm... sweetest spring..flowing in the mountain farm... held her in my hands .. dripped away... slightest breeze .. swept away .

I am the water .. and now in love ... She is like fire .. glimmering spark lot of hope spreading warmth ..soon i learnt.. Held her in my hands .. now i am burnt... with flames so high.. pressed to cry... tempest of love .. not a tear in the eye ...

I am the fire and and again in love... She is the ether.. n there is no pain ... surrendered to the unseen .. happy n gay... so i hold her in my arms .. but where she lay .. hahaha who cares ... i am dead any way .

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