Posted by Mahesh Jambunathan on Sunday February 25, @07:06PM
A true life depiction of how I want my love to be
A maelstorm of passion drowned me into the deep oceans of your love A moment of exuberance made me one with you The moment that had eluded me finally knocked me down As I played around your florid face memories past and present faded away Together we went places where we had never been Peaks of my ardor and the depth of your emotions Suddenly the I and the You disappeared as we merged into each other to be remembered as "Eternal Lovers"
What stayed with you?
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