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When Words Don't Say a Thing !!

·Monday March 26·1 min read·6 comments

When Words Don't Say a Thing !! (This article has been read 198 times) Posted by Mita on Monday March 26, @01:41PM Sometimes Words Don't Say A Thing ...... So This Time Can You Decipher My Words ?????? Hey, i'm so happy today, I want to laugh with me. For laughing doesn't need the words, which are in unscrupulous scarcity.. Anyway, its raining outside, droplets kissing the roof, its whispering, breathing, singing aloof. I placed my palm forward, but the rain-water seeped away. even it doesn't wet me, it also keeps me at bay..... Guess if it resembles , resembles much what i've been saying. No matter how much i say, words don't say a thing, they never ever say.....!!!!!!!!!!!!! And then i felt a dew drop, rolling out of my eyes.... I took it on my palm, To see deep inside. And how bewildered i was, to see a whole ocean on my palm....... An ocean of feelings, carrying turbulence in a way so calm. And i ran outside, to express my unexpressed pain. And suddenly my ocean, seeped away with the drops of the rain !! Do u know what i've been saying?? Did u see my ocean seeping away?? Can u decipher my words, For words don't say a thing, they never ever say ....... !!!!!!!!!

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rituarchive~2001-2003

hey this is very nice ,good poetry.i like it. [ Reply to this ]

Mitaarchive~2001-2003

Thanx a lot for yr appreciation. The simple way u said--"i like it", really made me happy . [ Reply to this ]

Amisharchive~2001-2003

it's an attack on the skill which clearly demarks between humans a animals ,its a blow to our cherished semantic institution...and many other things our professors type other people 'd say but yes to me it's a fact that words never say anything no matter if u are Norman lewis or an idiot like me who half the time dont get the words ....they never say anything right and more too when we want them badly perhaps that 's why i was never able to say anything to her that can convince her ahh my heart aches .......did you get what i say [ Reply to this ]

Mitaarchive~2001-2003

Its neither an attack nor a blow. Bcoz though languages do convey the materialistic views, but sometimes syntactically and symantically correct,as well, sentences fail to convey the soul of our feelings. And even "our professor type other people" surely must have experienced this at some or the other point of life. That's another thing if they accept this fact or keep debating on the difference between humans n animals. And this is what makes the human life and mind so complex .... [ Reply to this ]

archanaarchive~2001-2003

Hello Mita, Your poem is very nice and touching. Keep it up. [ Reply to this ]

Mitaarchive~2001-2003

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