just a strong feeling
dew-kissed lips or the knock on my ribs or the look in your eyes
if even after this and that and this
elbow to elbow on tables hand in hand across golden pebble or lip to lip in lonely chambers...
if even after this... love goes blank twists its meaning like a knife through flesh....
if even after the hangovers with sunset eyes or the patches of black on a morning sky or a storm and a long lost tune...
if even after this...
What stayed with you?
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