I love the feel of cold steel
Switchblade Living to strike Asp’s anticipation Coiled aggression Springing surprises Sinking fangs Venom is verity
Defensive sarcasm Resultant remnants Of denied ignorance
Sinking fangs deeper Jugular jeopardised Switchblade sex Vampire venom Tantalising blood Beckons
Taste blood Deceitful death Throttling truth No options Succumbed shell Death defies Switchblade embroidery On scarred scared soul
Switchblade life Switchblade soul Switchblade sex Switchblade self
What stayed with you?
A line that lingered, a feeling, a disagreement. Great comments are as valuable as the original piece.